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Promise Me by ~AkaiiDenetsu:iconAkaiiDenetsu:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Song


Verse One:

Night comes
darkness falls
sounds creep through the walls.
I look into your eyes,
light fades away
You're lonely
You're lonely
Dreams come, and pull you away.


Chorus:

And you need me
You need me
And I need you
I need you
"Don't Leave."
So promise me.


Verse Two:

As you wake
Dreams fade
but light won't reveal the day
You look into my eyes
Deep in your heart
You're only
You're only
Morning comes, and breaks you apart.

Chorus

Verse Three:

Footsteps on the ground
followed by shadows
wind blowing through my hair
You're the one who knows
Look into your heart
We've always
We've always
TURN NIGHT INTO DAY!

Chorus

Promise me!


~~~~~~~~~~(break)


Stay Here!
Don't leave!
I need you with me!
I love you!
Can't you see?
Take me with you!
I wanna be your only one!


~~~~~~~~~~(break)


I can see it in your eyes
you need me.
You can see it in my eyes
I need you.
Forever.
Always.
Love me.
Promise me...

and I'll promise you.
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Author's Comments

This is a song I wrote one night....un....

:boogie:

It'd be cooler if I could sing it for you...believe me...I'm filled with emotion when I sing this song....

Soooooo....tell me what you think! ^^ Criticism is welcome always! ^^ I :heart: criticism!


And:
The breaks are supposed to have music...but you'll just have to imagine the guitarist, pianist, drummer, bass guitarist, etc.,

^_~* I don't have music for it yet...other than me singing. So...yeah. Un. ^^;

Comments


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:iconsakura-katana:
~Sakura-Katana Aug 4, 2007, 6:47:27 AM
Man I wish I could hear you sing it! Its so good! :'(
It makes me sad that its actually not a recorded song I can download :(
Anyway favorited because this is loved! I found through the contest you were in.. :) Its very Beautiful! Im gonna check out the rest of your literature!

x3

--
“ 'Cause you remind me of a time when we were so alive
Do you remember that? Do you remember that?” -Paramore
:iconakaiidenetsu:
~AkaiiDenetsu Aug 4, 2007, 12:17:51 PM
=^w^=

Thank you so much!!! :heart: I was thinking about recording myself singing it, and then uploading the file...I sang an Intro Song I wrote...but I wasn't very happy with how it turned out...[link]

Do you think I should upload it? ^^''

Thank you for your support! :heart:

--
I did WHAT with WHO in WHICH fanfic?!?!! O_o
~*~
Roses are #FF0000,
Violets are #0000FF,
All my base
Are belong to you.
:iconsakura-katana:
~Sakura-Katana Aug 4, 2007, 12:49:34 PM
I think you should record yourself :D Oh and ill check out the intro soon... the download button isnt working :( but as soon as its working ill message you :)


x3

--
“ 'Cause you remind me of a time when we were so alive
Do you remember that? Do you remember that?” -Paramore
:iconakaiidenetsu:
~AkaiiDenetsu Aug 6, 2007, 11:14:57 AM
:D Alrighties...xD I'll record Promise Me...and another song...I'll be uploading the lyrics soon. ^^ You did message me. ^^''

^w^ :heart:

--
I did WHAT with WHO in WHICH fanfic?!?!! O_o
~*~
Roses are #FF0000,
Violets are #0000FF,
All my base
Are belong to you.
:iconfangirl-in-training:
~fangirl-in-training Jan 25, 2008, 12:15:36 AM
You know i write songs to? This one is really good when i post them would you mind looking over mine?

--
me: Wow.....(climbs on pips back)
pip: huh?
me: (shoots integra out of the sky) well i feel beter now
alucard: master? (pokes dead body with gun, grins evilly)
pip: (creeps away with me weirded out)
:iconakaiidenetsu:
~AkaiiDenetsu Jan 25, 2008, 7:42:29 PM
Thanks you!!! <3

Sure! No problem! ^^ I wouldn't mind! ^w^

--
I did WHAT with WHO in WHICH fanfic?!?!! O_o
~*~
Roses are #FF0000,
Violets are #0000FF,
All my base
Are belong to you.
:iconfangirl-in-training:
~fangirl-in-training Jan 26, 2008, 3:45:42 AM
thanks so much also do you like as in crush on in naruto? as in akatsuki naruto?

--
me: Wow.....(climbs on pips back)
pip: huh?
me: (shoots integra out of the sky) well i feel beter now
alucard: master? (pokes dead body with gun, grins evilly)
pip: (creeps away with me weirded out)
:iconakaiidenetsu:
~AkaiiDenetsu Jan 28, 2008, 5:52:41 PM
Hmm? Do I have a crush on Naruto (akatsuki version)? Is that what you want to know? :/

--
I did WHAT with WHO in WHICH fanfic?!?!! O_o
~*~
Roses are #FF0000,
Violets are #0000FF,
All my base
Are belong to you.
:iconfangirl-in-training:
~fangirl-in-training Jan 29, 2008, 6:30:03 AM
no not naruto in akatsuki AKATSUKI anyone in there?

--
me: Wow.....(climbs on pips back)
pip: huh?
me: (shoots integra out of the sky) well i feel beter now
alucard: master? (pokes dead body with gun, grins evilly)
pip: (creeps away with me weirded out)
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